All Comments on 'Revenge of the Maids'

Thx Migbird, I do have more to share, was hoping that there would be an audience for it here, and it appears that there is, so be on the look out for more.

Read earlier without comment; just finished again. Wonderfully erotic scenario/scene that could be the trailer for a full length feature — hopeful. This piece and vampire piece very well done; no wasted lines/spaces. Hope you continue to share your vivid imagination. 5 🌟

its just a short excerpt describing one of the scenes in the sexfight between the maids and the madame of the house, there is a pic that goes with it, but apparently can't be published with the excerpt. I agree the story needs a beginning and an end, I may add that, but the intent was just to describe a scene, not an entire story. thx for the input

Where's the rest of the story? No beginning and no ending.