All Comments on 'Revival'

by roxanne89

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nicely written. I loved your focus on her thoughts and feelings. You've left a lot of interesting questions to ponder about the relationship between these two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the story! Very erotic

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