All Comments on 'Rewards of Being an Exhibitionist'

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mar33mar335 months ago

absolutly love your stories! More please!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Excellent story, with interesting characters and a high level of eroticism. A few too many errors, which somewhat spoiled the flow - I’m surprised the grammar check didn’t catch most of them. You have picked up the rather strange use of ‘underwear’ which is creeping into US English - another example of trying to avoid ‘rude’ words, like using ‘restroom’ for ‘toilet’. Underwear for ladies consists of bra, panties, maybe a slip, so using underwear instead of panties or knickers is confusing. 5 ⭐️

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