All Comments on 'Rightful Revenge Ch. 08'

by MisterretsiM

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Just stop

chris2kchris2kalmost 2 years ago

Your characters have no redeeming qualities. Sorry but not good at all .

Crio77Crio77almost 2 years ago

Throughout the story , an inadequate reaction to treason is visible , so it is not people who do not react , not animals . It's more like hating the opposite sex and causing disgust

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I know not everything is for everyone. I'm just baffled at what this is supposed to be or what someone gets from it. Everything is cartoonish so the horror erotica mash up this is going for (?) is unsuccessful. The "arrogant asshole gets what coming to him" angle was blown past like 6 chapters ago as overkill, even from an exaggerated fictional angle. Seeing woman after woman "ruined" is so over the top, not paced out to be erotic, repetitive, and comes across hateful. The main character barely reacts to anything, and the premise is so weak. It's impossible to imagine that they were ever in a relationship of any kind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This author doesn't care about us, im sick of it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Man, Let Amanda Fuck Dani

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Youre better than this

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