All Comments on 'Ringmaster Ch. 01: Introduction'

Love the concept! You’ll need to be really clear what’s going on in everyone’s heads, and I hope you’re going to give us more history of the ring. But I love where you’re starting and my neurons are firing with ideas where this could go. Looking forward to it!

Lovely setup. Please do write more!

Thank you both very much for the supportive comments! More will be out as soon as Literotica approves and decides to publish them!

This seems very much like the series Changed by cheerful deviant

Great Intro:

I think this will be a very nice story series, however need to read additional chapters to determine if the story proceeding in a direction which I enjoy. I am generally not a strong fan of sexual manipulation.

Nice writing style, and I gave you a 5*-Star Rating🎉 for this chapter.

Love this story.

Nice! I know this is magical, but why doesn't Vanessa say anything about Regina's chains?

Quick comment😝❗ Intriguing❓ Got potential. Still I'll reserve a more extensive opinion for later😝😜😋❗