All Comments on 'Ringmaster Ch. 02: The First Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

nice

transpuppettranspuppetover 2 years ago

I think that the element you were missing from this is consent. It doesn't matter how gradually one alters someone else's mind or how much they make them enjoy it, it's still wrong. Maybe later chapters will address this, but I think you missed a good opportunity for a consensual mind control story.

GaylynneQGaylynneQover 2 years agoAuthor

Don't you worry transpuppet! Later chapters definitely address it, and it is very consensual!

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