All Comments on 'Ringmaster Ch. 04: Film Study'

Just a suggestion, I fine with your story, but they are a bit on the short side, maybe i'm just use to the longer, psudo-novel type stories. I like stories with background, it doesn't just have to be all about the sex, sometime, actually more times then not, I like a story more for its background story then the sex. But I do like a longer, more involved story. like I said before, just a suggestion...as the old saying goes, "Opinions are like assholes, everybody has one."

I noticed that someone commented the same thing on a previous chapter, so I've begun to condense down my works. This means that there will be longer chapters, but it'll also mean it might take longer for these chapters to come out.