All Comments on 'Rio, Ex-Pornstar Pt. 16'

Brilliant! Well written, funny and fucking hot!

While I could do without the straight sex these two are a trip! The image of Rio reading a thesaurus in bed is too damn cute!

These guys are just awesome together. You’ve done a good job of showing their developing authentic love for one another. I look forward to seeing these two guys make a bigger commitment to each other.

Thanks! But I can't help noticing that significantly less people are reading this chapter compared to regular. I thought this chapter, especially with Rio's words, would land more heavily than this. Have I strung the tale out too long? What am I missing? Maybe they aren't fucking enough? Message me?

Brilliant, I've been waiting for this! Please, continue the story, I need the next one 😊

Thanks so much for your comments :) Just in case anyone is wondering, this story is definitely not over. There's more to come. But given Rio has reached this point after a long internal struggle, I thought it would be a good time to let the story breathe for a while. Besides, I got distracted with a couple of other stories! I'm drafting some ideas for the next chapter, but if anyone wants to give me some ideas, please feel free to message me, I'd love to hear from you!!