All Comments on 'River City Superheroine Ch. 02'

by acadmus

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astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervover 4 years ago

nice.

"The bodysuit had two zippers: one from her neckline to her stomach and another at her crotch that disappeared between her legs."

Am i the only one who thinks a crotch zipper would be painful for both parties? How about a flap instead?

ChaosBreakerXChaosBreakerXover 4 years ago
Nice Second Chapter

I like the introduction of Masquerade. You did a great job in showing her character. I hope Masquerade seduces Grace in a future chapter.

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