All Comments on 'Rogers Dialems'

Having some conversation in quotes, and some not, it made your tale awkward to read.

^The story line was ok but it was written rather badly find an editor for your next attempt.

A really nice story with an adorable female protagonist, some imaginative erotic scenarios and an ending that raises hope for a sequel. I think a good editor would make your narrative easier to read but nonetheless, I enjoyed it.

Great story part 2 please