All Comments on 'Room Service'

The story, set-up, and major pieces are all good but a lot of the mechanics with four people are unrealistic. At one point the man is on his knees licking the maid's pussy while also fingering her ass and then taking his other hand and getting it into the ass of his fiancee who's getting fucked from behind by another guy. That's so difficult to actually imagine happening. Unfortunately, it kept happening after that too and made some things hard to follow.

The story's good but maybe reign in all the action at some of the more complex moments.

Room service came to the door and POOF!

Too many people in the room without names...

I couldn’t figure out who did what to who...

Was this in the gay section or lesbian???

Thank you for your constructive criticism; I think after reading it through again, I did maybe get a bit carried away from time to time!