by spiritseeker561
The sex in this was hot, but even without that, this would have been one of the best coming out stories I've ever read. You captured every emotion perfectly, from the fears of being found out to the sweetness of that first sexual experience. This was very well written and extremely believable.
Very nice story I guess I can see that EMAW applies to both of you. Love stories of first time seductions you did a great job with it. Even a Jayhawk enjoyed your coming of age story.
Very sweet story and spot on for a first time love/sex scene. Very well written