All Comments on 'Rosa's Mask Ch. 01'

A good start, well written and free of the usual spelling and grammatical errors that seem to plague so many submissions. Looking forward to the next installment.

Thank you.

Please edit and fix a few things. But good start.

If this is indeed your first story its well written. Not too long leaves open for interpretation and could be continued or left alone. Not bad kid.

Excellent for a first effort. Nicely paced, looking forward to reading more.

Not bad at all. Looking forward to next installment.

When are you dropping the next part?

Thank you for the feedback. I am working on uploading a bunch of other stories before I get around to continuing this one. However, if you like this one, you should enjoy my other ones - they are much more complete.

I very much enjoyed reading this I’m looking forward to reading more!!!

I reject my humanity Jojo!

Love what you wrote and need more of it please

A great story, I hope you continue it. Poor Val, she does not know what sexual awakening she is in for from Rosa. Rosa will get to try out her new dick for the 1st time with her roommate. A great story plot along with excellent character development. Wardmaster91D70

Have more faith in your ability! I can't wait to read the next chapter☺