All Comments on 'Rotic: The Literotica Elf'

Could've used that card a few months ago,

Awesome just awesome erotic christmas prose

your erotic tail ain't kiddin

I think I need to take my naughtiness to a new high to get onto that special list *wink* Great job, loved it. I'll check out other writings from now on. :-)

Oh My Erotic Tail.....

Ya know that I love you dearly....

Thank You for the lovely gift...

Good luck in the contest....

*blows Him a kiss*

Always, E

wonderful idea...thoughtful story

and humorously cute.

Happy Holidays:)

Guess I'm stuck with a lump of husband.

Oh well. I guess that's what boyfriends are for.

Love your writing ET

hAPPY hOLIDAYS MY FRIEND hee hee sorry I did the writing just for my critics :)

But, aww, man, I feel so jealous and left out! ;) Very fun read, ET, and I like the way you shop for prezzies!

twelveoone gets a watch with a naked girl that glows

it will match my tie's, thank you

you're demented

I can really appreciate this one, not only for the writing, but for the imagination that went into it and the time it must have taken to include so many personalities.

-Colly

in hopes that I will get mentioned in next year's story.

So glad I stopped by for a quick read and picked yours, :P

Way 2 go.

That was fun and we had a great time reading it! I was reading it alone, it was so cute I had to call my sweetie in to read it with me.

I STILL don't know what I got but this is such fun it doesn't matter. Well done Art!

First, thank you for the feedback on After Midnight. I figured I should return the kindness, in case Rotic wants to give me something next year!! Seriously (although it's hard to be too serious after reading your delightful stanzas), you have demonstrated complete Christmas creativity. Good luck with the contest!

How come I didn't get a present? I always leave good comments on your stories? (LOL!)

I do confess that your poem is superior

In every way but the Pryor Factor.

My poem is much dirtier.

"Honey123 got a box that sailed to her parlor, filled with some sex oils, that makes a cock taller"

That is fantastic! You never cease to amaze me! Wonderful tail...erm tale!

looking for my new video but finding just the ones i had. can you find out from him where he left it for me? lol

"Rumple Foreskin got a machine, that makes his pecker any size."

I appreciate the hell out of my present, ET. But you know how it is, a smaller version doesn't seem worth the trouble and my s/o would object to one any bigger. :)

So I tell you what, let's go into partnership and rent that baby out, we'd make a killing.

Rumple Foreskin

LOL That was really funny. And clever to get so many names in.

And thanks for the book. Maybe I should use it to write an entry too. *grin*

Good luck

I was dreading the Christmas Season, but Rotic has turned me around! Especially since I get a 'clit vibrator'. <wink> Thank you!

Art, this was fantastic! Your imagination and way with words is not only impressive, but truly a gift.

Merry Christmas!

Santa's sick and screwed, and Rotic's on the way to being hung over. No wonder I was left a Playgirl with MEN in it. Uh, Santa, MET, I don't do men, nor do I do MEN. Bah humbug!

Nice story. Imaginative, sick, but nice. :)

mismused

Why didn't I get the dildo? lol

Rotic nows the game so well. Sensational tale.. Loved the rhyme, humor, and all the perks.. This one is a Keeper~~!!!

A must read!!!

when it comes to sonnets, I need all the help I can get!! thank you Rotic, very much xoxoxo

What a fun story you've come up with for this contest, Art! So nice to read something a little different - your humor shines all the way through. Good luck with the contest, great job!

I got a pecker shaped mouse! Thank you Art and thanks for the laugh from a clever and talented man. Good luck!!

Thank you for you honoring me by including me in this..

L~

This is hilarious! and how did you know I needed another boomerang? Mine is worn out- Very funny! Thanks!

Lol Art with your usual flair you have left me laughing. Thanks much for the unstarched panties :) i like to cause stiffening in my own way without the help of artificial ingredients ;)

This is some nice work. Inventive and I'm impressed that you were able to keep your witty rhyme throughout the whole story.

Great job!

Be sure to thank Rotic for my stack Playboys... eh? ;)

Although a spell check might have helped.

I gave it a 5 anyway. Just because it was so much fun to read!

And a BMW for me? Thanks, Rotic! ~Imp