All Comments on 'Roy and the Necklace Ch. 04'

Really enjoying your story and have no issues with the way you write.

It's time everybody got a taste of his cock, I mean everybody

The chapters could be longer??

if the mist can change his sister's body, I hope if he spends enough time with his cousin, they are able to be turned into girls.

Loved it from start to finish. One typo I saw is below. Anyway, keep up the great work. I am looking forward to seeing things play out with the neighbor. She could probably be convinced to join in with Mommy.

'He is such a... such a...' her thought lost before opening her eyes and seeing her children, 'Roy in a MAN...'

I think you meant "Roy is a MAN"

I honestly don't think Church Town is going to be the "Artificial Insemination Mecca" it is for much longer now that Roy has the necklace and both are VERY active. But what happens when women start getting pregnant and he's the father? Can the necklace deflect any suspicions away from him? And just how big will Roy's harem get?

In other words, KEEP WRITING!

Roy should take his big butt cousins as well. Just don't have Roy being a bottom

Your chapters are far too short.