by therealauthor
Good premise.
But it's all just 'preparatory'.
You could use an editor/proofreader.
You wrote: "... my dick had begun going limb..." You meant LIMP.
You wrote" "... exiting and striping was what was done next." You meant STRIPPING.
"Member?" You wrote: "...my member was trying it's best to escape it's torture chamber," Do you EVER really refer to your COCK as a member? I suspect not.
Three stars.
above average story! Too many tasks! Too much details! Too long to actual tale/tail!