All Comments on 'Running the Futa Gauntlet Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Good pacing so far is say throw in a couple of non hyper encounters in there once in a while, and you got yourselves a banger of a series.

Ollie456Ollie4562 months ago

This was such a good story. Loved every part

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Pretty nice, but imo everything happens bit fast. Character development barely suffice (in a good way). But no self reflection, or new body problems, just nothing to check differences.

Eerm. Right now it looks more like a bunch of sex scenes with hypers and the story itself deserve being more deep

Anyway i'm looking forward for more

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Good improvement on the pacing, keep it up!

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