by MitziStephan
Firstly, I loved the storyline. A younger more experience lesbian seducing a willing 'older' lady.
Meeting how they did, is quite natural and happens quite often, I suspect. The teasing by Ruby when Amy dined, dropping just enough subtle hints not via words but actions, the loosening of an extra button, so beautifully explained. The morning run and some skinny dipping, the close contact without it being overtly demanding, leaving Amy room to say no thank you, if she was so inclined.
Well written and if you are writing from personal experience, good for you. If it is only in the author's mind, then well done again.
5 stars.
Read “Mike High” first, which is an intensely erotic piece from start to parking garage video text from April. Both pieces so sexually charged yet we gain of glimpse of your characters. Sex is outrageous but not gratuitous in both Amy pieces. Can only hope you do more than mention Mylene in future pieces; the reference to their relationship in the opening to “Mile High” whatever it is is such a tease.