All Comments on 'RV Family Ch. 01 - Family Meeting'

by DallasDarkchylde

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stockingnutstockingnut11 months ago

Wow! Please continue.

getthephenomgetthephenom11 months ago

Yes... please continue... 5 stars

kingswedekingswede11 months ago
Fantastic

Fantastic story you got going here. I can picture many “horny” chapters following.

tiger_ttiger_t11 months ago

Hot story, keep them cumming.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great story so far

Please write more asap!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I think its one of the best stories I have read in a long time, Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

WOW!! I loved this part of the story. Can't wait to see how the 2nd part goes!! Please continue with this story line.

Mr_coaterMr_coater11 months ago

Excellent start please keep it going.

Pinupfan53Pinupfan5311 months ago

Love your story, so many directions it an go. Looking forward to the next adventure.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now11 months ago

Purty fucking hot!!

DallasDarkchyldeDallasDarkchylde11 months agoAuthor

Hey everyone - This story just went up today, and while I felt it turned out well, I really wasn't expecting so many positive comments so quickly. Thanks for the encouraging words, and I guess I better get to work on Chapter Two :)

XenchuXenchu11 months ago

I definitely liked it and want more. Can’t wait to see where it goes. Get writing!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago
Very good

Keep writing. Don't stop. Don't forget anal action. Very good story.

grenefiregrenefire11 months ago

This needs a second chapter and soon!

TINK75TINK7511 months ago

Excellent! Such a great read. Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Cannot wait for Chapter2

MilothatchMilothatch10 months ago

Definitely looking forward to more. Keep going!

thewoozlethewoozle10 months ago

Really looking forward to more

oksideshow859419oksideshow85941910 months ago

You have my attention. Where will the story go from here mmmmmm....??¿¿

Mrwonderfulll42Mrwonderfulll4210 months ago

Fabulous story! Can’t wait for more.

loveofstoryloveofstory9 months ago

Pure filth, I was hard the whole time! Keep going

bpanther777bpanther7779 months ago

An excellent story. You did a great job in pacing and the internal struggle. Out - Fing - standing. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very nicely done! Looking forward to the next chapter😉

giftlinggiftling8 months ago

Wow, great story. I can't wait to read chapter 2.... and hopefully more

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Fuck! That was good.

ToughSailorToughSailor3 months ago

So-so so far. Could have done without the vulgarity. After all, they are family and not whores and sluts . . . . .

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An experienced (if as yet still unpublished) author of fiction, both erotic and otherwise. I just found this site, so I will contribute soon. Until then just enjoying what I'm finding 😃

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