All Comments on 'S.L - The Piercing'

Well done and well developed. Very fun tale of sexual exploring and a fun outcome. It does set up nicely for a second chapter. 5 stars for the great entertainment it provided. Cheers

I remember just over a year ago, when two of my female friends dared me to get mine pierced. You brought back some memories. And I have started doing what Charley did, wearing thin white shirts to show off.

Love the story

Nicely written story. I enjoyed it.

Nicely developed story.

Carlotta would spend the evening seducing Charley as she takes full ownership of Charley's pierced nipples as she owns best friend forever.

Good story, well written, but needs an other read through and maybe a little bit of an edit.

Thw winner is a loser and becomes winner again or so ….. never trust a goth girl or you will fall into her spider web and the spider woman comes out tonight and having me for dinner ….. all eaten up ….. about the school rules, yeah being a weirdo in whatever sense to the other normal teens, then its getting tough and ten or more year’s school will taking a toll ….. lovely tale and hopefully the opposites blonde black are happy lucky girls

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