All Comments on 'S.L - The Reindeer Stepmom'

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Ailsa_CraigAilsa_Craig5 months ago

This story is wonderful as is the whole series. But please! there is one mistake that you continually make and which upsets me reading. A salvia is a garden flower! The spit out of your mouth is saliva. Sorry to be so fussy :(

Becky_SapphireBecky_Sapphire5 months agoAuthor

Thanks Ailsa, I'll add that to my list of words to double check the spelling of when proofreading. Had a similar issue before where I kept writing longue instead of lounge.

DingbatwizardDingbatwizard5 months ago

A very pleasant way to spend a half hour with the rain tipping down outside in the yard I should be tending!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Super hot...very exciting...more...

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