by lezzielover
Needs some work but as this was yrs ago, guessing it's not happening
? feel like I miss something or something was left out
Good idea, but story sucked, looks like u wrote it in 5 seconds, no thought in it. Were u drunk or are you 5?
horribly written.
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I think the story should have been longer
I want to read more
I am new to reading erotic stories and it was really good. I gave it 5 stars. By the way it is spelled hymen.