by Kittie37
Well organized and very clear. I like your writing. Good job on developing the relationship that leads to the sex. This is a great line: "His words coated every part of me and my knees went weak.."
By far my favorite. I’m a sucker for tenderness and here, Daddy took care of Kitten in every way. He protected her from herself and physically gave her everything she needed.
Another impressive work of erotic word art...with emotional tethering that could not be ignored. Great job!!