All Comments on 'Safari NY - The Siren'

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ranfallboyranfallboyover 1 year ago

Good story, me thinks I should read the other Safari stories now.

WrangelFitzWrangelFitzover 1 year ago

Genuinely one of the hottest stories I've read on here in years. Excellent work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I knew when I read Safari that it triggered a memory but reading Sasha made me remember the Safari stories and how good they were. This one falls into line perfectly and was an awesome read. I guess it’s time to do a binge read of all those Safari stories since it has been awhile. Thanks for posting this story.

jonmartin22jonmartin22over 1 year ago

Thanks Maestro! -I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Are you coming back to writing more often now, reading this reminds me of the regular releases you did in 2019 dam those were the days and your stories have gotten better since just less uploads.

TheOutsiderOfLiteroticaTheOutsiderOfLiteroticaover 1 year ago

A superb amount of heart and time went into this entry. Great read my friend. Great Read.

maestro84maestro84over 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks! And sometimes that's the issue, because better stories take more time and work and it's harder to come up with new idea's, but I'll do my best!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Danm this is one of you best in awhile wholesome, sexy and it add to the kinda lore of thing proving that sasha is not 100% evil just chaotic netrual or maybe true netrual so yeah a fav, I’d love to see a story about a crazy guy who is just wild and untame someone who discovers what going on but instead of being scared he accepts it, one who came just to see if rumour are true and he trying to find love, (seeing how with the girl and lizard, the wolf, the guy after the snake lady from previous chapters, people seem to find one another here, he heard those so he came looking himself) find someone who can tame or handle his untameable nature a unique soul who under all his wildness is trying to find someone to adore, still someone who already free (seeing how she free people what if she met someone already free) a strange kind of guy, maybe an interesting challenge for Sasha or fate could have other plans, could bring up a cute mention to Her red witch friend, but it an idea, still one of my favs

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

I liked the story, even if it was a little stiff (no pun intended) at times. The dialog needs to be tweaked so that it flows and is a little more natural sounding. Still, it is a good story and was a fun read. Guess I need to check out some of your other stories. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This was one of the best, perfect? Want another one like this or maybe be part 2.

maestro84maestro847 months agoAuthor

Not sure what a part 2 would be about, but will give it some thought

NovaMNovaM5 months ago

Seriously? πŸ€” The lewdness is addictive. I don't do alcohol or drugs, but the stuff they serve at The Safari: solid taste and a surprising aftertaste. πŸ§«πŸ”¬πŸŽŠ Cool, more please.

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...

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