All Comments on 'Salewoman'

Who was she cheating with?

Well don!

I have one observation. It took her 'hours' to come back. It doesn't take that long to buy groceries. So.......

Fan-fucking-tastic! Still laughing my arse off. Thanks.

Interesting, I figured a different ending. I was thinking after the demo she would say, well what do you think about my new job?

Fun and sexy!

Begs some questions. The first of which is, was the husband her first customer? As we can't be sure he was her last! Lots of oppsie space here.

Gave this a 4-star.

I always consider it fun to read a story

where married couples having a monogamous enjoyment of sensual games.

But I do have one quibble --

Why oh why did she not return for hours back to the house?!

I suddenly had a though that she gave some sloppy seconds to someone --

someone not her husband...

/

But I have to perish the thought so I won't consider this

a CUCK story.

Very short, but I found the premise very exciting and loved the story. If there have been others like this on this site, I've missed them, so the uniqueness adds to the thrill!

Well…it would be tough to claim that Sweetie is NOT an adventurous wife, despite no

extramarital tryst (at least at this demonstration)

A master saleswoman!

4

Neat and original little story. Thank you for posting it.

So how does the wife know how to use all these sexual appliances and techniques, that are new to HIM? Her spiel reflects a woman of some experience, and enthusiasm. You have to wonder who trained her, and what her continuing education enTails. Psycho and silly. Grow up.

liked it. Good premise and her returning hours later adds to the realism of the role play, not that she was a cheating slut, as some suggested!

Too much.

Why don’t I ever get these sales ladies? 5* very original. 😊

Hopefully his was the first and last stop - though she'd certainly make a lot of money!

Wow that was different.

Interesting.

The writer managed to make

a fine flash story from a limited plot.

Well done.

4 out of 5 from me.

Silly, but certainly a different spin for the site.

What a fun little tale and an even funner little wife . The question remains however , what was she up to in those missing couple of hours ? This was a deliciously fresh tale of eroticism worth a 5 star rating to me

What a great, very different story line!! You unfolded the plot to craft a “it just like being there” experience. Well done!! Thanks.

"she can enjoy full penal penetration..." Sounds like punishment to me! :)

chapter 02?

A second chapter could answer a few questions and lead to more playtime.

Thank you and keep writing

Happens to me all the time!

So they have to use vibrators and dildos while they have sex well that tells me he can't get the job done with his own dick

Outstanding!