All Comments on 'Sally Steals the Show'

I like the story ! Definitely think there is a mistress / submissive storyline potential between the girls. - Something I would happily read !!

I also like how Sally isn't the stereotypical: naive, innocent, virgin daughter. As well as the display of friendship between the girls.

The only downside is at the start, you wrote that Candice lied about the clothes condition cause she was jealous. But later it's made apparan she was going along with Sally's wishes / desire. This was a small confusing jump in character development but ultimately didn't effect the story too much !

Premise had potential.

But really disappointing. Frankly, boring.

Two stars.

Nice story, a little corny though. Will Billy fall for Sally? Only the writer knows...................

Wow! That was really good! I enjoyed the lighthearted tone. It takes effort to write porn that focuses on consent and character motivation rather than rape and porn logic, so the fact you went through that effort is really admirable to me! The "only one naked" thing Sally had going added a lot for me. It was actually really great seeing Candice be her supporter rather than joining in, since a second girl in a female exhibitionist story is usually a tormentor or a secondary nude girl, so seeing a gal pal who was just being supportive was really nice. It was also wonderful to see a busty exhibitionist for once. I don't know if it's just bad luck with the stories I read, but it seems like a damn epidemic where every female exhibitionist character on this site is a C-cup or under or just has the general size of her breasts go conspicuously vague. All the comments about Sally being top-heavy or having "balls bigger than her boobs" added a lot of character and personality to the story. The tiny twist at the end with the officers was also a nice touch! Between the wholesome direction, the CFNF/CMNF/Only-one-naked, the large breasts, the enthusiastic exhibitionism, the cute doggie named Bad News getting pets, it all REALLY reads like it was written just for me. I know it wasn't, but it FEELS like it was, and that makes it all the more gratifying for me! It's hard for a girl to find erotica she adores on this site, and you pulled it off! So, thank you for this story. I'm not going to tell you to keep writing, that's your choice, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't interested in seeing more of Sally's buxom exhibitionist adventures. Especially since she hasn't gotten laid or a boyfriend like she wanted from intentional wardrobe malfunction at the start, so that's certainly a potential thread you can follow up on in a chapter 2! :D