All Comments on 'Salvation'

by Ilbfita

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great writing

This was great. I found the way you told the story to be strangely erotic, but rather than the usual wham-bam yours had a serious and inspiring ending. It tricked me because I thought it was going to be so different.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wish I'd read this when I was younger

Wish I'd read this when I was younger, it would have been a great help. I was a jock, football star - I held many of the same views. Then when I busted my knee and became Mr Average I really struggled to adjust. Good story!

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