All Comments on 'Sam's Story Pt. 10: The Ending'

Well, this ended very swiftly and no confrontations with the others by Sam. It was four years that he was being screwed by the four of them and suddenly it all ends. I do like the ending but it was just too quick. I would have liked more descriptions of what happened to the four of them before and during their prison terms. Were they used as cum dumps by the guards and prisoners? Maybe there is retribution by Sam even after they were freed from prison? Again, I loved the ending but frankly the four got off too easily even with the long prison terms.

At least they got what they deserved. Nice

great story, loved the happy ending. but happen to his mother in law??

What is it with people's fascination with cages?? I've also noticed a trend in stories with them, the man ends up as a cuck and/or into homosexuality.

Nice Ending. It did get pretty dark and tough to read.

Surgery for benign prostate enlargement almost never results in impotence. Surgery for prostate cancer can result in impotence. Stopping estrogens won’t make breast enlargement disappear. One needs plastic surgery to get rid of the enlarged breasts. The author needs to do some research. Other than the medical errors in this section, at least the slavery ended as did the torture, and our main character gets a life back. I’m not sure he could ever really be fertile after having been on estrogen and LSD for such a long time, but will allow for some artistic license, since it is only a story, I hope.

The first three chapters weren't terrible. Then it just got stupid. Sorry. I'm glad that you tried. I'm sure you'll get better if you keep at it.

Really had some good erotic writing for the first 4-5 chapters but it went downhill from there and fell off a cliff in the finale.