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Click hereBoth started to giggle. Both grabbed a handful of my hair and pulled. I laughed.
"It's alright! I forgive you all." I grabbed Mel's hand and said. "Thank you for bringing us together."
"No Jace! Thank mom!"
The End
See you in San Francisco - Part 3
- COMMENTS
Ricub3 months agoReally enjoyed reading both parts your story looking forward to the next one . Thanks for writing it.
Anonymous4 months agoNot a big fan of the dialogue. By your own admission, you're trying to make this a romance, and it does get a bit cheesy. Having said that, your situations, your writing, the story flow, they're all great. I'd rate it a four objectively, but ratings inflation being what it is, and so many far worse stories getting four or even five stars, there is no way I could only rate it a four. So 5/5 stars it is.
Dewey Cheatham
Oh, FYI, you mention Darth Aussie as a mate, so I don't know if you're Aussie, Kiwi, or somewhere else in that region, and certainly don't know those laws. But in the states, contrary to opinion, in the majority of states, marrying a cousin is legal. I know there's a stigma attached, but legally in most states, and actually genetically, there is no reason someone can't do so.
Erolove4 months agoAuthorThanks @Frankie1952. Feedbacks like these is giving me the confidence to write more.
