by Sandra_Wild
I absolutely loved this entire story, especially with all the exhibition and "humiliation" of Sandra. I hope you write the second chapter soon, since I can't wait to read more.
Wonderful story, but I was jarred out of the moment a few times because of grammar/spelling. Tab instead of tub, canny instead of cranny, passerby's instead of passersby.
Sandra - I was not disappointed. Your attention to descriptive detail is fantastic. I just wish I could be there to witness what you are describing! Keep up the good work.