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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ha funny and very well written! I could see the North Pole in your words..please write more and add more graphic details that makes the sex parts last longer…thank you for writing it!

Elaine_MatureElaine_Matureover 1 year ago

Beautiful new story!

If you want advice, add a sentence between each sentence in the hot scenes. How they're feeling, details of sensation, tiny grace notes to prolong the joy!

Thank you for submitting. You are clearly a talented writer.

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Hello everyone! My name is Sarah Sterntal, I'm a 31 years old, bisexual, woman from Germany. After spending some time as a freelance writer, I decided to branch out into more exciting directions. Here I publish erotic short stories fueled by a mix of experience and fantasy. I...