All Comments on 'Sarah and Ross'

It's just a simple fun little story, but I just loved the banter between the protagonists.

The story doesn't have a lot of setup or expostition, but you enter into it immediately and you are right there with them.

The characters are fun, the story is lighthearted and loving.

I just really loved everything about it and I'd love to see if you could do more with these characters.

What a fun story! Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

Very well done and thank you for sharing your work.

Best of all you shared surprises rather than cliches.

Lucky Me,

LuckyMM

The dialog was stilted and made me feel like I was listening to a BBC Victorian era radio drama.