All Comments on 'Saturday Morning Grocery Shopping'

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sexysmilesexysmilealmost 16 years ago
Decent start

I think this is a pretty hot little story. I was distracted by the consistent use of "your" when it should have been "you're," but other than that it was enjoyable. Thanks!

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