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by Luci_Loo

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sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 5 years ago
Bah!

Please don't write in present tense or second person, certainly not both!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
nice

sharing stories are THE best

loveloverloveloverover 5 years ago
Enthusiastic, horny, and apppreciative folks

Trouble is, I could not follow your perspective sometimes,

Luci_LooLuci_Looover 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I appreciate your feedback. It was my very first story and posted on impulse. The piece for me was more about simply being in the moment including what I was thinking, feeling and seeing in the moment. I welcome your suggestions on how to make the experience clearer to the reader.

Looking forward to hearing from you!

Lu

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I don’t care what tense it was in...

It made me rock hard when I was reading and that’s the whole point...love the idea of a business meeting getting interrupted!

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