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When she turned the corner, still in her grey shirt and now carrying a giant hot fudge sundae, he wasn't sure if he was relieved or disappointed. She brought two spoons and offered him one before she set the sundae down on the table. She slid into the seat, moving until she was close enough that he could smell her perfume, moving still closer until her side touched his.
Sharing an ice cream sundae. It was almost a cliché. A Norman Rockwell painting. Young love, taking turns spooning scoops of ice cream. Am I your boyfriend? He sent the thought in her direction, unable to speak it out loud. Are we together? Is this love? And if it isn't, then what is it?
He couldn't speak the words. Maybe it didn't matter. Just as long as she was with him. He took another spoonful of ice cream.
- COMMENTS
_robinover 1 year agoIs this love? And if it isn't, then what is it?
So tantalizing. I’ve been yearning for Charlie to tell Michelle that he loves her since the first episode. Finally, toes are dipped in the water here - Charlie says “I love your smell.” M. laughs, “My smell?” As if to say, what ..?
This story is so romantic, so tantalizing and affecting. I keep finding myself crying. The three principals show such emotional complexity, basically good people. Well, Charlie has a lot to learn but he is self-aware and intelligent. He’ll get there.
I’ve been thinking that there’s a fundamental weakness, an elitist simplification at the heart of the story. The characters are inexorably divided between the artistic intelligentsia (Ronni, Charlie,) and the boneheaded football/cheerleading crowd (Michelle, Cody etc.) BUT Michelle is actually funny, bright, shows real maturity & emotional intelligence. Her dialog, the things she laughs at. She is a brilliantly drawn and impressive character.
Oh, and is she submissive, or dominant? Whichever, it’s a real turn-on.
Thanks for this lovely story. I laugh, I cry, I’m emotionally drained ..
MADDOGINTEXASabout 2 years agoJessica, Jessica...you are SUCH a bad puppy...making us squirm like this...
The emotional rollercoaster is driving my reading of this series...you carry us to so many places on just one page, to say nothing of a chapter...
Melissa is sssooo daring, and she like being who she is...it is not like any of this is getting easier or too familiar to either her or Charlie...each contrivance sets a new bar for their behavior in public. And yet, they care for each other, you can tell...
Melissa's family background...I am wondering more and more about her, IS she hiding something terrible (we hope not!!), is she willing to introduce Charlie to Mom & Dad?? And, the big question, are they IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER...WHOIS GOING TO COMMIT TO THE OTHER FIRST?? Will the other accept the profession of being in 💘 love??!!
Jessica...you better not break their hearts at the end of this...and thereby break the hearts of your readers..."we expect better of you!!"
Kudos...and **5** Stars...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌
Anonymousabout 3 years agoHi loved your story . Great writing , look forward to reading some of your other ones. Eric
M. Millswanover 4 years agoJessica's Naked in School series is one I have really enjoyed. Her writing is of professional quality, and I love how she builds her story and the erotic tension. She leaves me always looking forward to more!
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoThere is a certain kind of warmth making the characters very likable. Their doubts, fears and lust for adventure is very genuine. For me this is the the final ingridient making your sexy ideas really erotic. Your writing is excellent, giving even a non native speaker the feeling of being there.
hudsiniabout 5 years agoI have this nagging feeling that the only reason she is with him is for her own sexual gratification and nothing more but he is falling fast without a handhold in sight. I do want to know what is going on in her head, what she is feeling and most importantly what she feels for him. Very well written. Keep it coming.
0ra11yfix8edabout 5 years agoUnable to stop! Nine installments, one more to go! I can't go on! Knowing that there is nothing left will break my heart! The most incredible aspect of this series is how you've managed to keep it fresh! Michelle seeming to come to her senses is a great plot device. Waiting patiently but anxiously!
koala011860091over 5 years agoReally great craft of writing here. I love how Charlie is so believably clueless at times, but does realize he should take charge when it counts. And I'm so intrigued with how Michelle's inter-tangled interests in exhibitionism and submissiveness are being slowly revealed. I almost died at the scene when they're making out on the mountain top listening to the people get closer and closer.
Great writing, I can't wait to see what's next.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThe images and emotions being lived by the characters just popped off the pages in this chapter - it was like watching a movie that was being projected directly inside my mind! Forget about Charlie's movie, "Saturday Night School" needs to be made into a real movie! Spectacular writing!!!
