by dyetied
Easy to follow storyline, also easy to read and believable (although it's friction) which makes a good if not a great author. so as you can guess I'm enjoying this tale. thank you. BUT (there's always a but!) a lot more "dialogue" is required for my taste. perhaps making him a cuckold, maybe being disciplined by his wife.
thanks for sharing
Good suggestions reads69. I do tend to be a bit too wordy, looking back. I'll work on it.
As for the man from the 'Brotherhood' who commented privately; Greetings. Do I get to have a life membership of that Brotherhood? Or, maybe is there no choice in the matter.
Love it. I assume wife will make him suck cock!!! Can't wait to read that!!!!