All Comments on 'Sausages Backstory Ch. 08'

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reads69reads69over 3 years ago
*****

Easy to follow storyline, also easy to read and believable (although it's friction) which makes a good if not a great author. so as you can guess I'm enjoying this tale. thank you. BUT (there's always a but!) a lot more "dialogue" is required for my taste. perhaps making him a cuckold, maybe being disciplined by his wife.

thanks for sharing

dyetieddyetiedover 3 years agoAuthor

Good suggestions reads69. I do tend to be a bit too wordy, looking back. I'll work on it.

As for the man from the 'Brotherhood' who commented privately; Greetings. Do I get to have a life membership of that Brotherhood? Or, maybe is there no choice in the matter.

Jaydean409Jaydean409over 2 years ago

Love it. I assume wife will make him suck cock!!! Can't wait to read that!!!!

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