All Comments on 'Saving My Marriage Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great World Building

And you character development was very good as well. I liked the twist where this ended up being a temporary learning tool. And although more chapters could work this feels like it complete the narrative. I would not object to following Jess's descent at the hands of her coworker however.

Again Well Done

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Black Mirror

This whole story could be an outstanding episode. The sex in this story is tame enough especiallyc onsidering their first episode.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

great premise. would like follow up on consequences of no pill.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent story. I like the pacing and am looking forward to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Holy crap this was hot af. We so badly need a follow up!!!

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I've written a few stories, but I'm more of a fan of reading stories. When I read something, I want a STORY. Not just some mindless fantasy. When I write, I really try to bring characters alive and I hope to make you feel like the world I've created is vibrant.

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