All Comments on 'The Paladin's Pet Pt. 01'

I enjoyed the story but I found it a little rushed. Particularly at the beginning. A slow build would have been nice or a little more dialogue to help the story along. I found it a little jarring as the characters seemed to jump into the action. Then jump again to more action. More sexual tension would have been nice.

That said, I liked way Laura was used for gratification. I found it an interesting twist and very hot. Thanks for sharing. 4 stars.

Hey, thank you for your feedback!

In this particular case, I wanted the story to go at this particular pace, but I'm glad that despite this you found it to your liking.

Hope you check out my other stuff!