All Comments on 'Scapegoat'

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JeanCFNMJeanCFNMabout 1 year ago

I Like the idea and that he hasn't just had her gang banged by all his mates...he seems decent but I'm sure there is a lot more to come

jleetechiejleetechieabout 1 year ago

On the bandwagon again. These scenarios are sci-fi. Action and writing are well done.

Carl_BradfordCarl_Bradfordabout 1 year ago

I have enjoyed some of your previous stories, but this is particularly good. I'm a sucker for "happily ever after" anyway, and you make it believable. Well done!

enraged8enraged8about 1 year ago

Loved this story. A mix of treachery and innocence. I imagine she is in for many mind blowing new experiences.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Digging it so far. Do take your time using this MILF up slow slow slowly but do allow others to get a taste as well.

Qwer12Qwer1212 months ago
Fun 5 Star Story

Great job with the storytelling and it was a fun little 5 star story that would be fun to add another chapter or three for the entertainment that you can have with these folks. Cheers

johnnuttalljohnnuttall12 months ago

Of course, the follow-up story is ellie's new owner buys her daughter because she gets arrested again.

mazk1098mazk109812 months ago

FINALLY some kind of story where hubby doesn't suffer

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Yes this is a very good first chapter for this story. This young rich perv is going to have the fun of his life with this good Naive MILF slave that is not allowed to ever say no to him. Just think of all the thinks he can do to her and with her, so Kinkly sweet. But how long will he keep her before he gets bored with this older woman? But maybe her daughter will fuck up again, and he can buy her as a slice too. Starting a whole new batch of kinky things he would be able to do with a mother and daughter over a 15 year Span of time. Maybe even have a couple babies from the both of they..

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

"probed both before and aft" Just how illiterate are you, anyway? It's fore and aft, not before and aft. Somewhere a teacher is rolling over in her grave.

bumblegrumbumblegrum11 months ago

Delicious. More, please.

Crusader235Crusader23510 months ago

Really good start. Few men haven't thought about having a slave girl of their own. I wonder if her Dawter will stay out of trouble?

Np81laNp81la6 months ago

It is the story I would write if I could write just hope the daughter gets punishment in the future

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