All Comments on 'School Days'

Great story especially if it's your first try. Very creative and sexy. I loved the story line and the fact that she feels things so intensely. It's like the act of him lifting her out of that chair let's him take ownership of her somehow. That simple act lets his dominant nature and her submissive nature both come out. And then, the pain mixed with the hot sex, really sets her free from her fragile body and let's her soar far above the reality of her daily life. Obviously none of my business, but I hope you can live out these fantasies in real life and that you have someone in your life that "sets you free". Keep writing..you're good at it.

For a first attempt at prose.

Hope it'll soon rise to the level of your poetry

Loved it. Made me wet. I love that you created a story about someone disabled. so many stories are just pathetic and you made this one HOT!!!! LOVED IT... Anymore???

Excellent work my dear sweet pet,i always knew you were talented.

Sexy and hot. Great write.