All Comments on 'School Reunion'

3 is generous. You really must proof read your work. The number of text and punctuation errors are almost uncountable.

Thank you for your feedback.

Put one of her hangers in James arse !!!

Get an editor and a proofreader.

Right after Jimbo made it worth it, you made me regret it.

A lot of grammatical errors

A nice story, but confusing... I want an orgasm on the crichendowed... Or a gentle vinegar stroke, but the best part was when she inserted the hangar in his arse... Fucking OUCH!!! I joke, but rereading for errors and spell check would make your writing much, much better. It was a nice concept though!!

whoever wrote the story never went to an english class when they were in school and that was obvious. Pretty fair story, editing much needed!

"a gentle vinegar stroke" - Yikes

And, BTW, the word is proofread, no proof read.

They're in their 30s and this is their 2019 class reunion?

Not only did you ski English, you skipped math.

Any star is an over-exaggeration.

Next you'll be telling us you have two dicks to fuck women.

Thank you all for your feedback. As you can tell I am not a professional writer. This is my first step into the world of erotic writing and a platform like this is a great way to get my stories out there and see how people feel about them.

I totally take on board with what you are saying. This is why sites like this are so helpful as they can help writers grow and get better. Thank you for reading what I have submitted.

this was a fun read, altho i wish for longer and more seduction. easy 4 star read. good job

Very kind of you to say so. Thank you very much.