All Comments on 'Schooled In Slavery'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Great story. Hope there’s a part 2. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent

Very good beginning. Make sure that you continue describing states of mind and other details. In this regard, it is better to use third person narration. Great that you went for Mistress and not Madam. Hopefully , the student will be reminded why she has a mistress, that she is a slave. Home lessons in the future? Good writing.

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