by brentcanuck
You really had my rolling a couple of times. I would recommend that you get someone to read your stuff that knows what they are looking for. There are some spelling and grammar errors that really detach from an otherwise well told story.
I laughed.
I'm pretty sure that by the category, that was the goal. Five stars for that.
Schwanky? Skanky! But fun to read, despite needing copy editing.