by darkestjungle
I was looking forward to a second chapter and you didn't disappoint. Will Liam and him ever talk about what happened?
Looking forward to Chp 3, pretty sure his stepdad is going to fuck him too... hot stuff!
Very disappointed that Aaron never had any discussion (that we know of) with Liam. No explanation, no acknowledgement, no apology for years of cheating and lying. The fact he was just dropped from the narrative was a huge gap. And now Aaron’s sluttiness seems pointless.
I just love the power and how the character is not being passive. Maybe it's fake, but it is rare someone can actually say no to jerks. Such a pressure relief. Also women-friendly. You will never know how many straight persons shaming women in gay male category.
Please carry on!!!
Now that he has ditched the boyfriend he needs an objective to aim towards. That can be stepdaddy or someone else. Lou I think would be interesting if he caught him and Ron together.
I enjoyed your story, but I think Liam would be more interesting to follow. How did a big macho top, discover he is actually a big ol boypussy bottom? Some great sex scenes would be sex at the office and the home orgies. Possibly going back to his beginning at his job, how he lived the double life for 2 years so convincing. Think this could be hot, and potentially several chapters. Think about it.
I’m also waiting for the continuation of Scorned Bottom, I hope chapter 3 will be released soon and the whole story will be written.