All Comments on 'Scorpions Kiss'

. . . how he let himself get stung twice on the balls!

So, in five years, Ron had never given his wife a single orgasm, but he was good enough to have a mistress on the side? How does that work? Why is Ellie pissed that he has a mistress if he can’t take care of business at home, since it gives her ‘permission’ to have a lover of her own on the side?

. . . Janet’s boyfriend was Jon, but at the end, it was Ron, which is Ellie’s husband’s name.

They turned black and fell off

THE END

Or the husband put it in there.

Something to make it less random.

So, Ron didn’t mind that Ellie was getting some on the side, as long as he got to fuck Brenda. Ron’s feelings aren’t explored, so it could just be that he tolerated but didn’t like the idea of his wife having a boyfriend as long as it meant he could keep fucking Brenda.

There really was a lot here which could have been explored, but wasn’t.

The scorpion is the only likeable character here.

Well damn. Sorry about the gaff on Janet's boyfriends name. My bad.

Wondering what role the late scorpion played in this tale ... or maybe just WHY?

Why waste your time and effort with marriage Just bullshit drama.

not becuase of the open marriage

I hate cheaters and cucks, but open poly relationships arent cheating

1 star for thinking the guy would have an erection less than an hour or two after being stung by a scorpion

Average person takes nearly 12 hours to get over the venom assuming they get stuck in an exrtermity like a hand or foot

basically main lining scorpion venom into your main veins next to you cock?

Neurotoxins and major inflammatory responses near your dick? True you arent going to need medical aid, but you aint down for fucking anytime soon either

Double standard much?

Author's usual trash writing. Never had written anything worthwhile.