All Comments on 'Scoutmaster, Mr. Conroy Pt. 01'

I liked it despite the numerous grammatical errors and typos. I think The Boy Scouts are for pussies, kids not good enough to play Sports. That organization is also a Haven for Chomos and Creepers.

I disliked this story. Very short on content. Just one boys fantasies while the scout leader carried on as usual.

Nothing really

This didn’t make much sense. It is not likely that a 50 year old man is going to sleep naked with an 18 year old. Despite his attraction, the teen would not jack off so close it this older man. I expected there to be some build up, mutual staring, a seduction by the daddy and then something. But this seemed unrealistic.

Interesting comments so far. I think this your best effort yet. Your storytelling and style are developing nicely! Following you now so I don’t miss the next chapter.