by Hornychub78
Interesting comments so far. I think this your best effort yet. Your storytelling and style are developing nicely! Following you now so I don’t miss the next chapter.
This didn’t make much sense. It is not likely that a 50 year old man is going to sleep naked with an 18 year old. Despite his attraction, the teen would not jack off so close it this older man. I expected there to be some build up, mutual staring, a seduction by the daddy and then something. But this seemed unrealistic.
I disliked this story. Very short on content. Just one boys fantasies while the scout leader carried on as usual.
Nothing really
I liked it despite the numerous grammatical errors and typos. I think The Boy Scouts are for pussies, kids not good enough to play Sports. That organization is also a Haven for Chomos and Creepers.