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Click hereSome were upset that the ceremony was sprung on them by surprise, but they had to agree to the logic that the travel to get to this gathering was already a financial burden and were thankful they didn't have to make the trip again in a few months.
As they celebrated and danced for several more hours, the couple danced together completely engulfed in each other. They took the time to talk to Each and every one of their families and Gere's innate ability to relate to each individual soon had won over Joys family, and Joy's outgoing energy endeared her to his.
The evening ended with Gere and Joy sending off each family member. When everyone was gone and the two of them were alone, they held each other close and kissed. The kiss was long and filled with passion. Now they were one and, they reveled in the season.
Joy had always loved Christmas but for the rest of her life it held a special meaning to her. She always told Gere it was her favorite season, the one that gave her the most joy. Gere would smile and relish the play upon his beloved's name. He began thereafter to refer to Christmas as HER season a..... Season of Joy!
I honk this maybe your best effort. I read everything you write and this entry did not disappoint.
Quote a long story for a contest but a very enjoyable one.
Yes there were a few typos, speech mark error, etc which did upset the flow a little but you've commented already on the comments made.
Not that much drama as it all centred on the love blossoming between Gere and Joy. Overall, though a lovely story (and title) for this time of the year.
Well worth its rating.
I re-read the comments and was surprised there were still errors after running spell check in my word processor AND then putting it through an online editing software, a lengthy process! I read a few pages and found typos the were not there earlier and even a whole phrase missing I distinctly remember adding and saving! I suspect it is user error but it bears investigation. Thanks for your kind comments and ratings.
Beautiful story, I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Some editing errors crept in, such as quotes with quotes should have single quotes, and there were a few stray quotation marks around, but still a good seasonal read.
This is a fine story with just the right amount of sentiment and romance. Very well done, sir. It does need a bit of proof reading, however: words missed out occasionally and a number of typos. This doesn’t detract from a good story, but some re-proofing might be in order. 5*