All Comments on 'SECAUCUS - Pt. 01'

Where is part Deux?

It turned into a great story in spite of extra "vo-dee-o-do-do" I can't believe I am saying this but the sex almost got in the way of the story. I see you included Bruce it must work since he is in your latest story "Two-on-Two".

4.79 stars ~ 5

Terrific story- so far. Unfortunately, Part 2 has never been posted.

So, where's Part 2?

France doesn't produce Chardonnay. The Puligny-Montrachet is indeed a lovely white burgundy.

You need an editor, badly. And some wine education, too. Luis Latour has some great wines, always had. But it is not enough to throw in a high segment brand name. Nobody in his right mind would drink a 2021 Puligny-Montrachet at this stage. The 11-13 vintages are lovely right now.

This was over the top sweet. I may need insulin. Conversations / characters got a little confused on p 3. Nice enough though to hold my interest to see what's in pt 2

Couldn't get past the first paragraph. Chopped sentences are awful and make the story hard to read much less follow. Please sir get an editor

Wow this had everything, like a story that makes me laugh along with everything else. As a fan of the natural hairy pussy I loved the description of her bush, especially after some hot and heavy sex. 5 stars+