All Comments on 'Second Verse Better Than First'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Characterization

The story itself is fine so far from making love scene between buddies. However I wish more storyline of introducing both characters and thier nature of friendship before going to fuck with each on the bed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Read more.

Do the comment next to mine, int he first story there was a discription. I am a girl and ntil i read this story i didnt know guy-on-guy sex could be so... exciting.

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